05-26-2004, 04:34 PM
Shlama Akhi Paul,
I did some more proofreading.
In verse 5, circumcize should be circumcise.
In verse 7, occurred should have two r's instead of one. I had to double-check that tidbit on my native tongue at dictionary.com. <!-- s --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/smile.gif" alt="" title="Smile" /><!-- s -->
In verse 16, didn't you mean 'that fell off'?
In verse 20, uncleanness should be spelled with two n's. I had to double-check on that one, too. Oh well, thanks be to Alaha for online dictionaries. <!-- s:bigups: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/bigups.gif" alt=":bigups:" title="Big Ups" /><!-- s:bigups: -->
In verse 30, wouldn't Antikia work better than Antakia since there are two yudh's? <!-- s:dontgetit: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/dontgetit.gif" alt=":dontgetit:" title="Dont Get It" /><!-- s:dontgetit: -->
Can I draw my unemployment benefits from atour.com when I'm not busy helping out? <!-- s:biggrin: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/biggrin.gif" alt=":biggrin:" title="Big Grin" /><!-- s:biggrin: -->
Shlama w'Burkate, Larry Kelsey
I did some more proofreading.
In verse 5, circumcize should be circumcise.
In verse 7, occurred should have two r's instead of one. I had to double-check that tidbit on my native tongue at dictionary.com. <!-- s --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/smile.gif" alt="" title="Smile" /><!-- s -->
In verse 16, didn't you mean 'that fell off'?
In verse 20, uncleanness should be spelled with two n's. I had to double-check on that one, too. Oh well, thanks be to Alaha for online dictionaries. <!-- s:bigups: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/bigups.gif" alt=":bigups:" title="Big Ups" /><!-- s:bigups: -->
In verse 30, wouldn't Antikia work better than Antakia since there are two yudh's? <!-- s:dontgetit: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/dontgetit.gif" alt=":dontgetit:" title="Dont Get It" /><!-- s:dontgetit: -->
Can I draw my unemployment benefits from atour.com when I'm not busy helping out? <!-- s:biggrin: --><img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/biggrin.gif" alt=":biggrin:" title="Big Grin" /><!-- s:biggrin: -->
Shlama w'Burkate, Larry Kelsey